Thursday, May 23, 2019

food for thought

Food for thought.

We have been learning about food for thought,
I have learnt that you have to have less than 400mg sodium.
I have also learnt that there is 16 tablespoons of sugar in coca cola.I have learnt that sparkling duet has 49.5 tablespoons of sugar in it.


One thing I think I could work on is make sure they mach the topic. I really like how i added new learning and new facts   

Thursday, May 2, 2019

Oceans

Oceans

What's an ocean?
A place with hot sand,
A place with water as clear as glass,
A place you can have an amazing swim,
It has crashing waves that smash against the rocks and water,
that's an ocean.


Haiku poem.
Diving for crayfish,
bright orange crayfish swimming,
scared hidden crayfish.

What I learnt on my definition poetry is that you have to ex plane it not say what it is.

One thing I like is how I wrote five seven five syllables on my haiku poem, one thing I need to do better is add more science words.
By Patience