Thursday, May 2, 2019

Oceans

Oceans

What's an ocean?
A place with hot sand,
A place with water as clear as glass,
A place you can have an amazing swim,
It has crashing waves that smash against the rocks and water,
that's an ocean.


Haiku poem.
Diving for crayfish,
bright orange crayfish swimming,
scared hidden crayfish.

What I learnt on my definition poetry is that you have to ex plane it not say what it is.

One thing I like is how I wrote five seven five syllables on my haiku poem, one thing I need to do better is add more science words.
By Patience

1 comment:

  1. I like how you added a adjective before a noun.
    Do you like eating cray?

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