The 10 most important things in a recount.

Today in writing Olivia and me were remembering about how to write a good piece of recount writing. We were discussing to each other ''what are ten things you need to have in a recount'' We wrote 10 things down and put in order. I enjoyed this learning because I got to work with a new buddy. Something I would like to learn next time is something new about recount. I found it hard to think about all the important things. I found it easy to put the 10 things in order.  Next time I will put it in a more descriptive sentence.  

#1 Putting it in correct order.

#2 Ading you scenes/Hear, feel, smell and taste.

#3 Putting in rich WOW words.

#4 Answering, who, what, were, when and why. 

#5 Using or adding some facts.

#6 Including Punctuation. 

#7 Descriptive Words.

#8 Remembering your paragraphs. 

#9 Full rich sentences.

#10 Full stops and capital letterers.

Is The Environment Our Responsibility?

We have been learning about how to write an quality piece of persuasive writing. The last few weeks we have been doing our draft piece of persuasive writing about ''Is the environment our responsibility'' At first it was challenging but I started to get the hang of it, the more I researched and focused more on the topic it started to get easier and easier. Once I finished my draft piece it was time to copy and past it to my google slide. After I work on my slide I get to publish it to my blog. I enjoyed this learning because it was very interesting and there were a lot of things I learnt during my writing. I liked researching all the facts and learning from my writing. Next time I will try and finish it faster and put it in my own words fully. I also think I need to work on knowing what im about to write. A question I still have about is how much rubbish flows out in the ocean every single day and a question for you Is the environment our responsibility?

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Night time and Dusk

We were learning about how to write and described our favorite time of day.

I found it easy to copy and past  our writing to the web.

I found it challenging to figure out what part of the day I was going to write about.

Next time I will add more scientific words and describe more about my favorite time of day.

 

Awapuni School Fun Run

We were learning about how to write a piece of descriptive writing about our Awapuni School Fun Run.

I found it easy to copy and paste my recount writing into a google slide.

 I found it challenging to start my recount writing. 

 Next time I will try to use a bit more descriptive language in my writing.

 

Digital Reading Challenge

We were learning about how to voice type story into our Digital Reading Challenge in one minute.

I found it easy to voice type my story into the slide.

I found it challenging to edit the story I was voice typing into my slide.

Next time I will try to get more words or the most I can.

Quality comments

We were learning about How to publish a quality blog comment to other people. I found it easy to make the google drawings. I found it challenging to figure out what I was going to write until I was looking at the slide. Next time I will add a bit more facts because I don't think I have enough.

Matariki slide

We where learning about how to write a proper Matariki report.
I found it easy to edit all my work.
I found it challenging to think of what I was going to write.
Next time I will take my time and not get distracted.

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