I found it easy to copy and paste my recount writing into a google slide.
I found it challenging to start my recount writing.
Next time I will try to use a bit more descriptive language in my writing.
Sunday, August 16, 2020
Awapuni School Fun Run
We were learning about how to write a piece of descriptive writing about our Awapuni School Fun Run.
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Hello Patience.
ReplyDeleteI think that the story was great because you did 3 good sized paragraphs.
I liked the part when you said "Mr Barclay sprinted as fast as he could, over the hay bales."
Next Time you could maybe reread it a couple more times, because there was a few spelling mistakes and things that didn't make sence.