Tuesday, September 22, 2020

Is The Environment Our Responsibility?

We have been learning about how to write an quality piece of persuasive writing. The last few weeks we have been doing our draft piece of persuasive writing about ''Is the environment our responsibility'' At first it was challenging but I started to get the hang of it, the more I researched and focused more on the topic it started to get easier and easier. Once I finished my draft piece it was time to copy and past it to my google slide. After I work on my slide I get to publish it to my blog. I enjoyed this learning because it was very interesting and there were a lot of things I learnt during my writing. I liked researching all the facts and learning from my writing. Next time I will try and finish it faster and put it in my own words fully. I also think I need to work on knowing what im about to write. A question I still have about is how much rubbish flows out in the ocean every single day and a question for you Is the environment our responsibility?

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1 comment:

  1. Hey Patience, Toby here.
    You did well on using big words and hooking me in with your information. I really think that the environment IS our responsibility! I like the part when you said that mechanics dump their rubbish and oil in the drains, because its true! Next time I think you should check your grammar and spelling because I noticed a few mistakes in there. Also, I don't think you could get cancer from the air being polluted.

    From your writing buddy, Toby.

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